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fifty-eight (the girl in this poem)

Posted on April 1, 2015 by nike sulway

necklaceThe girl in this poem
does not love you
She’s just a girl, after all
one syllable, four letters
barely a phoneme, she’s just a
noun, common as a lettuce
or a paperclip.

The woman who wrote it
on the other hand
is a wreath of bones and blood wrapped
round a disobedient heart
(a heart as small as a baby’s fist) She just
loves you, an emotion as common as a paperclip
or a lettuce.

 

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11 thoughts on “fifty-eight (the girl in this poem)”

  1. carlabillinghurst says:
    April 1, 2015 at 8:52 pm

    Love this one, Nike! 🙂

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    1. nike says:
      April 1, 2015 at 10:36 pm

      Thank you! X

      Reply
  2. becjessen says:
    April 2, 2015 at 12:18 pm

    The girl in this poem
    loves the woman who wrote it

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    1. nike says:
      April 2, 2015 at 5:19 pm

      xxxx

      Reply
  3. Sean Wright says:
    April 3, 2015 at 4:27 pm

    Needed a tissue warning. 🙂 Very well done Nike.

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    1. nike says:
      April 3, 2015 at 5:26 pm

      Thank you, Sean! I’m sorry if you were out of tissues. I find the edge of my sleeve handy in emergencies. 🙂

      Reply
  4. Bronwyn says:
    May 6, 2015 at 10:46 pm

    Lovely!

    Reply
    1. nike says:
      May 7, 2015 at 1:34 pm

      Thank you 🙂

      Reply
  5. Jane Bryony Rawson says:
    May 12, 2015 at 2:12 pm

    Beautiful (but what else would one expect?)!

    Reply
    1. nike says:
      May 12, 2015 at 3:59 pm

      Ugliness? I should try to write more dark and ugly things ????

      Reply
      1. Jane Bryony Rawson says:
        May 12, 2015 at 4:25 pm

        Nah, you can’t help writing all beautiful-like.

        Reply

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